L Verez {L-7}
Hypermedia Champion
Open minds and positive vibes!
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Post by L Verez {L-7} on Nov 27, 2017 14:19:04 GMT -6
So, this has been only the second RP I've written that got near the 5k mark, To be a Guardian... being the first. I put a lot of time and effort into this one, so I would love to know what you guys think, and how you guys think I've improved since the above RP. ~Please and thanks to all who give feedback! Hidden Gems |
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Nov 27, 2017 18:29:47 GMT -6
Like I said last night, that shoot was spot on, straight to the point, and hard hitting. Some of your best yet.  I also enjoyed the story, but it was the shoot that really stood out to me. |
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Post by hippoharry on Nov 27, 2017 20:55:08 GMT -6
Sexy, strong and just what we needed 💯💯 and dat confidence!
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L Verez {L-7}
Hypermedia Champion
Open minds and positive vibes!
Posts: 289
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Post by L Verez {L-7} on Nov 27, 2017 23:34:44 GMT -6
My shoot is what stood out? Odd. I usually feel I'm better with CD than shoot.
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Post by hippoharry on Nov 28, 2017 0:24:45 GMT -6
My shoot is what stood out? Odd. I usually feel I'm better with CD than shoot. L, you straight sniping 💥🔫 #BAMF |
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