First RP Ever: Interview with FPV: New UCI Signee!

The first thing I'm thinking is "Holy shit, this guy already kind of 'gets it'." so to speak.

What you have here isn't great, but it's far from bad. The thing that is great here is the potential you've shown in a 1k teaser promo of sorts.

I honestly sucked major ass in my early efforts in the efedding game and I've also seen many others not quite be "developed" so to speak, but in your debut effort, you've shown a boatload of potential. So I'll go ahead and list a few points here.

Positives:

-Color Coding (Not that this is ever required to win or indicative of a good or bad roleplay, but it helps many readers and I'm a bit surprised to see someone employ it's function in their first rp. Nice touch from a newbie.)
-Writing ability (You already have this, but not all newbies have it right out of the gate. Nice to see.)
-Grasp on natural feel (There are a couple quirks and bits of awkwardness that come with being a virgin in the realm of efedding, but I can see that you do have a bit of a feel for the basic idea of an efed roleplay)

Tips (Not mandatory, but these would help you develop):

-Read other people's RPs and see the variety in scenes and things covered (For a beginning teaser promo, a basic interview with FPV is fine. As far as becoming really special goes, you should look to get more into multiple scenes that address yourself as a wrestler as well as your wrestler as a person. Sven is a bit of an unknown to us still, but we know he suffers split personality. I've seen gimmicks like this before and they can pretty cool given that you go into a bit of variety with things such as scenes depicting his personal life and business ventures here in UCI.)
-Keep at it (In efedding, people sometimes get discouraged if they lose matches. This is reasonable when people pour themselves into a character, but don't let it get you too down. I can't say how many wins or losses you will pick up, but just know that as a fed owner, I see a ton of raw potential in you.)

Overall, just keep at it, man. Also, look into those around you here and the work they're putting out in RPs and think "I want to become as good of a roleplayer as that guy." I see someone here who can definitely be molded into a really good roleplayer by allowing those around him to make him better and putting in the work to improve each week.