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Post by Kevin Bishop on Sept 10, 2017 9:59:28 GMT -6
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Sept 11, 2017 13:56:35 GMT -6
I found the cue cards to be an interesting way to present your shoot; it could be interpreted as accommodating or condescending, maybe both, to one degree or another. The part addressed primarily to Armand was much more vicious and reflected a lot of Kevin Bishop's darker nature, from which he isn't yet far removed. Part of me wonders if this is a foreshadowing. Also, I dug the infomercial part at the beginning. This is what the fans want to see in a World Champion -- leading by example.  |
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Post by Jack "The Crack" Schlongson on Sept 11, 2017 17:16:33 GMT -6
Solid use of current events to elaborate on a sort of world building with The Guardians, and then being able to switch from that kind note to a vicious shoot without contradicting your character is a great talent, I will say it did feel a bit like two separate parts with small connective tissue, but other than that, the voice was strong and using Preecha's deafness to change your shoot up shows a careful deliberation in handling your opponents that shows why you are the world champ. Kinda wish Preecha RP'd because I think you two could have had a solid as fuck match.
I liked the difference in addressing Preecha and Armand too, didn't pair them up, really took into consideration of them as individuals which really brings an awareness to your character. Over all great shoot, maybe someday you two will have that match I know you two could have. Worried about the day I may have to face you haha.
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