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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2017 15:30:02 GMT -6
I wanted to post this a few days ago, but I didn't get around to it.
Been rather busy with work the last couple of days.
I felt like this roleplay might have been slightly better than the one that took place at the ppv.
For all the right reasons. I knew I had competition in the sense that people would be showing for said match.
With more effort/time put into this one. Figured, I'd just get some thoughts.
Thanks in advance.
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jun 13, 2017 15:40:44 GMT -6
I dug it. I really enjoy the way you illustrate how Calvin the asshole heel wrestler differs from Calvin the family man, it gives the character a very relatable feel. Also, the story was well written, had me in suspense until the end; as a reader, I sympathized with the worry, the anticipation... I was invested. Really good all the way around.  |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2017 15:49:31 GMT -6
I dug it. I really enjoy the way you illustrate how Calvin the asshole heel wrestler differs from Calvin the family man, it gives the character a very relatable feel. Also, the story was well written, had me in suspense until the end; as a reader, I sympathized with the worry, the anticipation... I was invested. Really good all the way around. Thanks! I appreciate the kind words.
Being someone that has been into wrestling ever since I was a child.
Being someone that has wrestled and been part of the business for the last couple of years.
I have a better mindset than some people might. Not a knock at anyone, but I tend to have that edge.
I remember as a kid I always believed that the guys I saw on TV where like that in real life.
But obviously as I grew up, got wiser, and understood things. That's not the case.
I really like to compare Calvin to Triple H sometimes. Triple H by far one of the best heels/assholes in wrestling.
But when he takes that suit off, when he goes home, he's a family man and loves his little girls to death.
I've always wanted to make sure there was two sides to Calvin. Well two sides when he's a heel.
There's the prick everyone will see cutting hateful promos and beating the shit out of you in a ring.
But then there's the man that takes off the boots, the tights, and goes home to his family. He's the softer version of himself.
After all if there's anything I have ever learned with wrestling.
Each persona/character we see is a similar person outside of the ring, just aped up about ten times.
But like I said, I appreciate the kind words. Appreciate that someone can relate and enjoy the "two sides" of a person.
More than anything I am glad that I could tell a story that people could get behind/invest themselves in. |
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