Post by The Hentai Prince on Oct 13, 2016 20:14:51 GMT -6
Hey hey everyone, it's HP comin at ya to deliver something really special! We decided that to help other writers, we will give feedback to anyone looking to improve! For a while now Jack and I have wanted to help other writers who may feel they are not reaching their full potential and with this thread, we hope to point out strong points as well as weak points with a general overview of your RP.
Here's the plan. When we do give out feedback, what we will be evaluating are these specific aspects of your writing:
1.) Characterization: How well you present your character and the consistency of that presentation.
2.) Voice/Prose: A look into the flow, word choice, and structure of your writing. It isn't about writing the prettiest, it is about what is most fitting for intent.
3.) Roleplay Structure: Different from the structure of your writing, here we are looking at the utilization of mechanics, pacing, and thematic intent to create the RP as a whole.
4.) Shoot: Along with coherency and potency, all the previous criteria accumulates in to this one in general.
5.) Entertainment Value
Rules:
1.) Link Your RP in your post.
2.) No more than one request per person at a time.
3.) Please be patient, upon request we will get to with in a weeks time depending on schedules and demand.
To start off, we will only take six requests at a time to see how well this goes and if we are feeling good about it, later on we will add more.
Let us have it!
Here's the plan. When we do give out feedback, what we will be evaluating are these specific aspects of your writing:
1.) Characterization: How well you present your character and the consistency of that presentation.
2.) Voice/Prose: A look into the flow, word choice, and structure of your writing. It isn't about writing the prettiest, it is about what is most fitting for intent.
3.) Roleplay Structure: Different from the structure of your writing, here we are looking at the utilization of mechanics, pacing, and thematic intent to create the RP as a whole.
4.) Shoot: Along with coherency and potency, all the previous criteria accumulates in to this one in general.
5.) Entertainment Value
Rules:
1.) Link Your RP in your post.
2.) No more than one request per person at a time.
3.) Please be patient, upon request we will get to with in a weeks time depending on schedules and demand.
To start off, we will only take six requests at a time to see how well this goes and if we are feeling good about it, later on we will add more.
Let us have it!
