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Post by Preecha Kamon on Aug 9, 2016 1:37:12 GMT -6
Okay, so I am writing this with the knowing I may get zero responses (and I am perfectly cool with that! No guilting here!). But for a while I have had this story (well, a few different ones but this one is probably the one I am most willing to show people right now) that I have been working on on-and-off for a long while now. After a long break from it, I decided to start chipping away at it again and I am hoping to get somewhere. What I am hoping (since this is a huge fed of some of the best writers I have seen on the internet) is that I could get one or a few people that I could show chapter by chapter and get opinions and thoughts; see if it is getting the right reactions and putting out the right ideas, as well as general feedback. Now I know, it is already something to read through an RP, let alone a selfish narcissistic display of literary dick flexing (and again, if no one really wants to, my heart isn't broken) I am just never really good at seeing my own work clearly besides as a jumble of words, and outside perspectives may help me out.
The story itself is a satire/sci-fi/comedy titled atm "Quit Dying" and openly a rip off of everything I love about Kurt Vonnegut (I won't be so lame as to try to disguise it with the word homage). If you are by any chance interested, please send me a PM. You aren't going to have to read a big hundred page thing. It is my plan to just send it chapter by chapter slowly, as to not to overwhelm but also to make sure each one is well enough by itself. If you are a masochist and decide to say yes to this, I thank you a head of time!
Sincerely and Insecurely, Gable
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Post by David Sanchez on Aug 9, 2016 15:11:14 GMT -6
Hit me with the first chapter when it's ready to go
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Post by The Polar Phantasm on Aug 10, 2016 8:55:56 GMT -6
Holler at your boy, brah. -B.
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Aug 10, 2016 11:15:11 GMT -6
Put me on the list, too!
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Erin Fausse
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I thought you'd died alone, a long, long time ago.
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Post by Erin Fausse on Aug 11, 2016 22:58:45 GMT -6
fuck me up widdit my dude
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