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Post by David Sanchez on Jul 31, 2016 23:48:09 GMT -6
Simple is, as simple does. I'd like a little bit of feedback on my latest RP as it's getting thumbed by different people than usual. I'm happy with it on the whole, I just need an opinion on the lay-out. A big part of Sanchez RP's is the underlying intense conversations between he and Knives, I need to know if this is becoming too much for the shoot to be enough, or if I need to adjust the balance. Feel free to comment on anything else too but yeah, have at it boys. *parts cheeks*
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