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Mandie Wheeler Developmental Posts: 44	Any comments on my rp? Jul 24, 2016 9:04:28 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mandie Wheeler on Jul 24, 2016 9:04:28 GMT -6 The Mandie Project : The End is coming / The Beginning Anything is appreciated.
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Mandie Wheeler Developmental Posts: 44	Any comments on my rp? Jul 29, 2016 21:00:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mandie Wheeler on Jul 29, 2016 21:00:51 GMT -6 Bump really wanted feedback. lol
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Any comments on my rp? Jul 29, 2016 21:41:34 GMT -6 Crow McMorris and ＤＩＡＶＯＬＯ like this

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Post by Dune on Jul 29, 2016 21:41:34 GMT -6

I liked how you structured your promo. Backstory > present day > shoot is a good basic formula, especially for new characters. The fact that you focused on your shoot more than any other aspect will probably serve you well come results time. Good stuff man, best of luck this week!

Crow McMorris Midcarder @murdermachine Posts: 396	Any comments on my rp? Jul 30, 2016 7:10:08 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Crow McMorris on Jul 30, 2016 7:10:08 GMT -6 Super busy right now dude, but I'll get to this Monday and pass on my thoughts.
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Mandie Wheeler Developmental Posts: 44	Any comments on my rp? Aug 2, 2016 2:16:06 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mandie Wheeler on Aug 2, 2016 2:16:06 GMT -6 OK NP
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Spencer Adams: Apologies for any deadline confusion. Deadline is just under 14 hours away. The 12pm was meant to be midnight in the EAT zone, same deadline time that AW runs. Sept 26, 2019 7:12:57 GMT -6

Spencer Adams: Updated deadlines: All roleplays must be submitted before/on the deadline of 12PM EST/11PM Central on Thursday, September 26th. All matches/segments must be submitted before/on the deadline of 12PM EST/11PM Central on Friday, September 27th. Sept 20, 2019 12:26:58 GMT -6

Spencer Adams: I moved participating characters old bios into active for match writing purposes. Feel free to update if you'd like. Sept 3, 2019 18:50:01 GMT -6

Post by Mandie Wheeler on Jul 24, 2016 9:04:28 GMT -6

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Post by Crow McMorris on Jul 30, 2016 7:10:08 GMT -6

Post by Mandie Wheeler on Aug 2, 2016 2:16:06 GMT -6

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