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Post by Jericho Salazar on Jul 3, 2016 15:10:07 GMT -6
Hey guys if i could please get some feedback for my first rp that would be cool!
I happy except all feedback from "fgt u sux, kill urself" to actual feedback!
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Post by Spencer Adams on Jul 5, 2016 11:18:53 GMT -6
u sux, kill ur-
Nah, just joking. Anyways, nice return RP and a good job with getting across that this character is a grumpy asshole. From your time with the bulk of the fed's roster to now, I can tell that you get the idea and continue to progress quite nice. My advice is to just keep on the grind and keep looking for things you want to improve on and really focus in on those points.
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Post by Leviathan on Jul 6, 2016 11:38:24 GMT -6
Any correctable grammar mistakes aside, it made me laugh, and I think that's the positive to draw from it. It got Jericho "the character" across and pretty well too for a debut RP. Just continue to improve in the areas that you may be lacking in, never get "too comfortable" with Jericho, continue to evolve your game and you'll see yourself doing very well in the UCI. Keep it up man!
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