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Post by Corey Bull on Oct 22, 2017 20:39:49 GMT -6
Tried something different with the off camera....wanted to write a horror story AND still make it seem like a plausible thing lol If no one has guess yet...Bull is a former angel that fell and God isn't what everyone things, but more of a universal machine. I'm still working on its explanation. But yeah...comments...thoughts...ideas lol
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Post by Kevin Bishop on Oct 22, 2017 22:19:48 GMT -6
Um dude... I don't know about anyone else but I'm harder than a diamond in an ice storm right now. I mean I dug what you were doing with Bolas, but you have a serious voice with Bull. Keep slaying brother and aim for that too brass.
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Post by Corey Bull on Oct 22, 2017 22:29:30 GMT -6
Um dude... I don't know about anyone else but I'm harder than a diamond in an ice storm right now. I mean I dug what you were doing with Bolas, but you have a serious voice with Bull. Keep slaying brother and aim for that too brass. Ive never had a remark like that lol But its great to know that my writing isn't just lost. Thanks man, Bull has always been my favorite character...and I am adjusting his backstory a bit to be more mystical for UCI. But still within Bulls normal parameters. |
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Post by Corey Bull on Oct 24, 2017 20:45:05 GMT -6
BUMP
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Post by Jack "The Crack" Schlongson on Oct 26, 2017 21:53:49 GMT -6
Dude.
Like...duuuuude.
I've always believed that even though it seems some gimmicks are doomed to failure for one reason or another, there is someone with the wherewithal to be able to pull it off. I usually never dig supernatural gimmicks (specifically ones in e-fedding based around demons and angels), because a lot of the time, the writing skill never meets the ambition and it ends up coming off very CW TV-14-ish, but I honestly think, especially after reading that opening scene and how you presented it with a strong perspective heavy voice, you know more or less what you are doing with this character. Also framing it like a horror story was a smart move, because I think it lent tone to the second half and created this sort of uneasy feeling and ominous mood that kind of helps sell some of the concepts your character talks about, such as his immortality and such.
Would love to hear about God as this sort of 'universal machine', always dig ideas of a unique metaphysical design. Think that is something that can flourish widely in the UCI-mythos as it were. I see a lot of ambition here and that is something I always dig in writing.
Gonna keep my eye out for more of your stuff. Solid work mang.
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Post by Corey Bull on Oct 27, 2017 12:50:00 GMT -6
I'm on the fence about doing either a CD giving the basic idea of the god machine as a whole or just hoping it can be pieced together by readers through my normal rps. My though....is that if they have a basic structure of how it works, then maybe they will understand it more. Im not sure, thoughts from anyone on this would be helpful.
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