Warbird
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Post by Warbird on Oct 19, 2017 12:01:52 GMT -6
Thoughts? I’m a little rusty, and had to do some creative tweaking to fit the word count. Made it a little more challenging with the number of opponents. Hope y’all enjoyed it though, was fun to write this one and to be back efedding...
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Post by hippoharry on Oct 19, 2017 21:50:56 GMT -6
MAne, you joshing everbondy around here. I loved your take, cept the stuff about Parkinsons was a bt too much. Otherwise loved how you get about dissing the whole squad of this place and your division. Glad we weren't cracking it back because I'd be up all night for the comebacks, dude.
It's hard too when you don't have a match under your belt because everybody has no idea what to think. You made one hell of a splash, mane. Keep up the comedy - so long as we can all laugh at the joke tho. Some could hit a little higher above the belt, not that I didn't laugh my a off anyways. Great stuff tho, and a great start to your dude. 100
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Warbird
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Post by Warbird on Oct 20, 2017 9:48:15 GMT -6
MAne, you joshing everbondy around here. I loved your take, cept the stuff about Parkinsons was a bt too much. Otherwise loved how you get about dissing the whole squad of this place and your division. Glad we weren't cracking it back because I'd be up all night for the comebacks, dude. It's hard too when you don't have a match under your belt because everybody has no idea what to think. You made one hell of a splash, mane. Keep up the comedy - so long as we can all laugh at the joke tho. Some could hit a little higher above the belt, not that I didn't laugh my a off anyways. Great stuff tho, and a great start to your dude. 100glad you liked it, but ICly, he wont hold back. Going too far or pushing it is his nom de plume... lol |
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Post by hippoharry on Oct 20, 2017 15:23:52 GMT -6
MAne, you joshing everbondy around here. I loved your take, cept the stuff about Parkinsons was a bt too much. Otherwise loved how you get about dissing the whole squad of this place and your division. Glad we weren't cracking it back because I'd be up all night for the comebacks, dude. It's hard too when you don't have a match under your belt because everybody has no idea what to think. You made one hell of a splash, mane. Keep up the comedy - so long as we can all laugh at the joke tho. Some could hit a little higher above the belt, not that I didn't laugh my a off anyways. Great stuff tho, and a great start to your dude. 100glad you liked it, but ICly, he wont hold back. Going too far or pushing it is his nom de plume... lol Oh la la we getting Frenchy up in here! Still loved it tho, keep up that funny AF stuff coming. |
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Post by Jack "The Crack" Schlongson on Oct 25, 2017 17:05:33 GMT -6
I usually don't for this type of character, as most people seem to have a hard time to make it fun instead of just mean spirited, but you did a stellar job setting (and rolling with) his voice. The sort of vile persona really helped capture a sort of lightning quick whip which made it a really fun read and made the whole thing feel very distinct, which (as I've said so many time to the people in the RS division) is hard as fuck with the word limit. The interplay (or lack there of) between him and the interviewer was legit funny and was a great help of establishing mannerisms in a efficient use of space.
I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for future RPs with this character, so keep them coming.
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