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Post by Preecha Kamon on Oct 15, 2017 17:08:17 GMT -6
Hey! I RPed again for the third time in a hundred years lol. LET ME KNOW THOUGHTS PLEASE! I, Ghost... (Part 2) |
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Post by hippoharry on Oct 16, 2017 0:39:52 GMT -6
Loved it the first time, good reading two times through, mane. I always like when you get that action thing going and it puts like words and fights together. You get like video edits almost that make it all work smooth.
What else but a little more anger, dude, you can get angrier than that. I felt it deep tho. So yeah, you had it right by its throbbing heart and kept a hold of it. i liked the way you did the talk parts too. Big props for how it all came together. All those pieces should be chaotic but it wasn't. Give yourself a pat for that, at least, mane. Much repsect from me.
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