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Post by Asher "Hired Gun" Bradley on May 29, 2016 13:52:02 GMT -6
This is where I will be posting my feedbacks for my "Building Upon Ashes" series. Any and all feedback is welcome as always. I apologize for spamming the feedback threads so far. I am kind of a feedback whore haha!
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Post by Spencer Adams on Jun 5, 2016 14:28:31 GMT -6
You're a good writer with a solid character here. I don't have any major gripes. I think you personally just looking for little tweaks and improvements is what will help you get it down. I also think more time writing with this character will make him grow for sure.
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