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Post by Sah'ta Thor on Jul 31, 2017 18:47:12 GMT -6
So here goes... What do think of Thor so far?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2017 22:22:29 GMT -6
Sorry I missed this thread when you first posted it... Anyways, I like the voice and the energy of the character. Thor has the sort of confidence you expect of a veteran - and he actually talks like one too. Many bring that A-game yet aren't convincing on the first stroke. You did; likewise, you definitely enjoy being this character. That's a huge factor to longevity - what every fed needs.
If you're open to critiques: 1) Look to use the full spectrum of your medium / means of display. For me, I like seeing how a perspective is shown to your readers (assumably the UCI fans too). You already do that but there can always be more. 2) Maybe let us see more setting (something I'm more guilty of, admittedly). An extra bit of detail there will bridge those tiny rivers between scenes.
All in all, you've got a sturdy voice and character worthy of gold. No predictions, only an observation of current promos. Great work so far!
- U
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Post by Sah'ta Thor on Sept 5, 2017 14:02:39 GMT -6
Okay going to bump this up now that I have been here a few cards and see what sort of things you are all thinking. Let me know what sort of things work and what you want to see more of if you would.
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Post by Sah'ta Thor on Sept 10, 2017 2:22:24 GMT -6
Bumping this up again
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Post by Sah'ta Thor on Sept 17, 2017 14:31:42 GMT -6
Now that I have another match RP under my belt curious to see what people think of the RPs and the direction of the character over all
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