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payasoloco Jobber Posts: 105	#Bitch Please (Feedback) Jul 9, 2017 21:00:34 GMT -6 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by payasoloco on Jul 9, 2017 21:00:34 GMT -6 So I went ahead and took Gem's advice; stuck w what I know and just cut the middle man. What's everyone think? Work a little better now?

Bonnie Blue Tag Team Champion UCI Triple Crown Winner Posts: 1,214	#Bitch Please (Feedback) Jul 11, 2017 14:25:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bonnie Blue on Jul 11, 2017 14:25:51 GMT -6 I think the narrative flows better now, yeah.
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#Bitch Please (Feedback) Jul 12, 2017 19:07:23 GMT -6 L Verez {L-7} and Cheyenne like this

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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2017 19:07:23 GMT -6

I hope you don't mind me giving feedback, since I'm new here.

I just wanted to say that you're perspective was on point and you really hammered home the focus.

[For me] I like to leave stage directions neuter, letting them paint the picture without much voice behind it. Be in the moment of poetry w/o stating too much (minor point).

I enjoyed how aware you were of your medium (filming/cameras/ect.). That's a quick glance right now--cool stuff. Hit me back w/e.

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Spencer Adams: Apologies for any deadline confusion. Deadline is just under 14 hours away. The 12pm was meant to be midnight in the EAT zone, same deadline time that AW runs. Sept 26, 2019 7:12:57 GMT -6

Spencer Adams: Updated deadlines: All roleplays must be submitted before/on the deadline of 12PM EST/11PM Central on Thursday, September 26th. All matches/segments must be submitted before/on the deadline of 12PM EST/11PM Central on Friday, September 27th. Sept 20, 2019 12:26:58 GMT -6

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