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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jun 10, 2017 11:20:37 GMT -6
... but could I get some feedback on my latest? It's my first rp as a member of #beachkrew and I want to make sure I'm on the right track.
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Post by Leviathan on Jun 10, 2017 15:04:56 GMT -6
Your shoot/match commentary in the last year has gotten so fucking good. You have the ability to make any match you're in feel like the biggest match on the card and that has definitely attributed to your success here and in WCF.
Not much really to offer in the way of feedback, you touched on a lot of important points in your promo without beating them into the ground, and left even more for future developments.
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Post by Alex Richards on Jun 11, 2017 8:39:14 GMT -6
you're awesome Bonnie! Your roleplay this week was just another example of that. You're not the champ for nothing Bonnie, you're a bad ass writer.
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Post by Evil Paul Rudd on Jun 11, 2017 23:13:52 GMT -6
you are such an ass kisser Alex. I'm glad I killed you.
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