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Post by Kuno Kenji on Apr 23, 2017 11:46:45 GMT -6
Title: Back, but How?Would love if a few of you lovely gentlemen and ladies would give me a bit of feedback, no need to hold back on the criticism. |
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Post by NegaSoniK on Apr 24, 2017 9:42:08 GMT -6
I like it, maybe try shoot for something longer next time if possible... which is kinda hypocritical coming from me but yea. and maybe lil more shoot but it was a fun read.
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Post by Kuno Kenji on Apr 24, 2017 15:29:15 GMT -6
I like it, maybe try shoot for something longer next time if possible... which is kinda hypocritical coming from me but yea. and maybe lil more shoot but it was a fun read. Yeah, I had more planned, but Bolas announced he was leaving for a while and I felt that more would probably end up being a lot of repetition, so i just cut it. thanks for the comment though |
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Post by NegaSoniK on Apr 24, 2017 16:49:09 GMT -6
I figured as much.
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Post by Malice on Apr 24, 2017 17:50:26 GMT -6
There's something to be said about a short concise shoot. You can say a lot with 500 words. Times like you have where your opponent is publicly no showing is a good time to work on that.
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