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Post by Wentworth Updegraff Jr. on May 22, 2016 12:21:44 GMT -6
Of Winners, Losers and CesspoolsThere's my RP for this week. If anyone wants to drop some knowledge on me, feel free. Don't worry I'll get upset. I'm good with criticism.
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Post by Spencer Adams on May 22, 2016 13:20:54 GMT -6
There have been some RPs that show off experience in the game with how they're crafted and this is one of them. I think you're showing the beginning to a few interesting subplots and possibilities in your RP that I hope are developed in coming weeks. Overall, good RP here that shows you know what you're doing. I think shoot could've been a bit more fleshed out, but I won't criticize it hard since it's only Week 1 as I've said before and knowledge on opponents is limited within our universe at the moment. Keep it up. Good stuff.
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Post by "Mr. God" Benjamin Atreyu on May 26, 2016 20:12:28 GMT -6
*Gives thumbs down and raspberry*
Kidding aside. I joke about burying you a lot (because, personally, that's hilarious), but there is no way I would get away with it, because, despite my UNWAVERING BOILING HATRED FOR YOUR NEW RADICALS LOVING FACE...you continue to show why people respect your writing so much. Amazing and vivid description which paints a very specific picture of the world from your character's view. Great characterization which introduces your character in a very immediate and coherent fashion, leading to great interactions which bring out the vibrant nature of the world in which the character lives. And you have a vision, you know how you want it all to come off and you do it. As I've mentioned to others, I often feel an RP should feel like one single piece, and that is definitely what this RP did.
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