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Post by Bolas de Arana on Mar 29, 2017 17:28:15 GMT -6
My latest rp, "You Think You Know Me" is up and I want to get some feedback from the people. I have gotten a lot of advice here and there, and I want to see how people are feeling this particular rp.
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Mar 30, 2017 5:17:35 GMT -6
I liked it. It was a lot more intense than previous rp's. Interesting to get a peek beneath the surface of who Bolas is.  |
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Post by Kevin Bishop on Mar 30, 2017 12:13:42 GMT -6
I hit you up with praise in a PM before I realized you posted wanting feedback.
So I'll say this for all to see...
DUDE! You killed that shit and you took advice and you ran with it. Thank you for being the HERO that we all knew you were capable of being. Thank you for peeling back a few layers for us all to see of Bolas.
We are going to have an epic battle and I couldn't be happier with what you brought in your rp this week.
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Post by Bolas de Arana on Mar 30, 2017 22:42:20 GMT -6
I hit you up with praise in a PM before I realized you posted wanting feedback. So I'll say this for all to see... DUDE! You killed that shit and you took advice and you ran with it. Thank you for being the HERO that we all knew you were capable of being. Thank you for peeling back a few layers for us all to see of Bolas. We are going to have an epic battle and I couldn't be happier with what you brought in your rp this week. Im apologizing in advance to the main event lol Cause we are killing it this week! And thanks man. I feel as if I can open up with Bolas more. And your welcome Bonnie, I am working on exposing more layers of Bolas for people. I just want to make sure I do it right, with off camera stuff revealing the things I don't want to openly say but allow the readers to experience. |
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Post by jenson on Mar 31, 2017 13:06:43 GMT -6
I'll have a look in a few, once I finished posting mine son. By the sounds of it though, this is going to be brilliant.
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Post by jenson on Mar 31, 2017 13:42:50 GMT -6
Just had a quick scan, all I can say is this:  Simply put, the tweaks you have added just work a whole bunch and gives Bolas a whole new dimension. Keep on going this direction, surprise us and delight us and the stuff that we talked about in our PMs will just happen naturally. |
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Post by Bolas de Arana on Mar 31, 2017 14:38:32 GMT -6
I have to give you a big shout out Jenson. There are still somet hings I want to do with Bolas based on our discussion, but you have helped me find the direction I wanted. Add in Kevin's suggestions, and I think I have a great path.
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Post by jenson on Mar 31, 2017 14:55:10 GMT -6
Good stuff. Glad I could help. Now if only you replied to the other pm about the feud!
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