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Post by Leviathan on May 22, 2016 7:04:04 GMT -6
 Also feedback? It's the cool thing now  |
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Post by Lyndon "Big" Diehl on May 22, 2016 7:15:44 GMT -6
I only got five likes.  |
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Post by Leviathan on May 22, 2016 7:18:23 GMT -6
Needs more tit probably |
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Post by Lyndon "Big" Diehl on May 22, 2016 12:05:58 GMT -6
Needs more tit probably Next time I'll use a pic of JBL where he's shirtless. |
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Post by "Mr. God" Benjamin Atreyu on May 26, 2016 20:07:06 GMT -6
Honestly, dude, I don't know where to begin (in the best way possible, of course haha). You have always been a treat to read and this was no different. The way you are using the set up and lore here, while adhering it to your own previous set ups, WHILE keeping it fresh to the new company, is amazing. Wade is an incredibly well defined character and you are using a lot of the mystery behind the lore to your advantage.
Plus, your writing, prose wise, is awesome as always. Incredibly distinct voice that really pulls me in and sets me in the moment. I wish I could say more, but honestly, just keep being you and I'll be happy as a judge haha.
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