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Post by Alex Richards on May 21, 2016 22:01:54 GMT -6
well it's been about 6 months since I wrote a roleplay. How'd I do? What did I screw up?
Thanks for any feedback
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Post by Spencer Adams on May 22, 2016 0:16:31 GMT -6
The strength here was what it always is with an Alex Richards piece, the weird. I thought this rp was pretty damn hilarious and definitely didn't look like the work of someone who hasn't written a roleplay in six months. Good job, man.
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Aurora
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Post by Aurora on May 22, 2016 14:53:22 GMT -6
I think I already gave you feedback last night but repeating myself, I loved it!! I know the rest of the house had to think I was losing it when at 10:30-11 last night I was laughing like crazy while reading it. My favorite to picture in my mind is still Alex beating the guy over the head with the bottle like it's a rolled up newspaper lol. I've always found myself to be one of ur biggest fans and pulling for u week in and week out. I hope more than anything that ur creativity is rewarded here whereas its been more or less punished for in other cases. Richards is one of my all time favorite characters, I could never find anything bad to say about ur work. You have nothing to worry about in my eyes  |
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Post by "Mr. God" Benjamin Atreyu on May 26, 2016 20:18:11 GMT -6
There aren't many times where I find myself laughing out loud to roleplays (or much in the form of the written word. I usually have a quiet sort of enjoyment), but man did I laugh hard to this RP. I love the Richards character, and this RP made me love him even more. When he become Allen, I knew I was gonna love it, but I almost loved it even more when he turned back to Richards, because it was such an amazing contrast, which made the humor so much more effective. The line where he says, and I may be misquoting here, "the moral of the story is I'm good at everything" had me rolling. You are a master of your character and absolutely nailed it. I'm excited to see you here and I really want more Richards in my life haha.
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