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Post by Malice on Feb 8, 2017 13:18:03 GMT -6
I had time early this week to write. Not so much for the rest of the week.
If anyone has time to give it a glance and give me criticism I would appreciate it. Thanks.
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Feb 9, 2017 11:16:27 GMT -6
I thought it was good. You're establishing her humanity, a little vulnerability, as compared to that side of her that's the no-nonsense intelligence operative. Makes her more interesting...
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