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Post by Malice on Jan 18, 2017 10:27:04 GMT -6
Origins RPAny feedback would be appreciated. \roastme
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Post by Spencer Adams on Jan 18, 2017 21:32:13 GMT -6
#TeamKari
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jan 19, 2017 13:44:11 GMT -6
So far, so good. I didn't read it and think "Oh, that's totally a dude trying to write like a girl" or anything like that. Having a perspective advantage in actually being a woman, I'd have to say you handled it well.  |
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Post by Malice on Jan 19, 2017 14:50:19 GMT -6
Is that a sex in the city reference Because this characters totally a Samantha I mean I'm a man. I have no idea what you're talking about. |
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Post by Malice on Jan 19, 2017 14:51:45 GMT -6
So far, so good. I didn't read it and think "Oh, that's totally a dude trying to write like a girl" or anything like that. Having a perspective advantage in actually being a woman, I'd have to say you handled it well. Thanks Bonnie. That was the goal. Just to write her as a person and not let gender have anything to do with it. But still at the same time focus on the badass woman motif. |
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Post by Spencer Adams on Jan 19, 2017 15:07:23 GMT -6
Is that a sex in the city reference Because this characters totally a Samantha I mean I'm a man. I have no idea what you're talking about.  Give it some time. You'll understand and applaud my cleverness! lol |
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Post by Alex Richards on Jan 21, 2017 15:07:04 GMT -6
it was a good promo, especially for a first one.
Besides nothing wrong with a dude writing a woman character.. plenty wrong with a dude pretending to be a girl writing a woman character
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Give it some time. You'll understand and applaud my cleverness! lol