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Post by Deleted on Jan 15, 2017 14:34:24 GMT -6
Posted for Overload this week. It's been a couple weeks since I last had a match. The last one didn't work out for me considering how much effort I put into my rp. Hopefully this week does work out. Although I'm interested in seeing what people thought of it.
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jan 18, 2017 9:39:33 GMT -6
I liked it. I like your character's candor, his open nature, the way he's reflective; a lot of his personality comes through in the most basic gestures. He's not afraid to admit what he's feeling, but he doesn't dwell on the negative. I think this roleplay really exemplified those qualities. It also highlighted how very different Mikey Carson and PerZag are as competitors, as people. It was a well-rounded, solid promo. Y'all both really stepped it up to near main event quality.
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Post by Alex Richards on Jan 18, 2017 10:09:27 GMT -6
yeah that loss two weeks ago wasn't your fault. Just like the loss this week isn't PerZag's fault. Writing a great roleplay and just getting edged out by someone else who wrote a great roleplay is not something to be ashamed about. Happens to the best of us.
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