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Ray Burnett Developmental You take me back to '99.. Posts: 46	The Prelude Feedback. Jan 13, 2017 10:25:42 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ray Burnett on Jan 13, 2017 10:25:42 GMT -6 I posted my very first roleplay, and wanted some criticism on it, thanks.
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jan 14, 2017 7:16:19 GMT -6

Good stuff, solid intro rp. I know first roleplays are often the hardest, just because you never have a lot to work with starting out. I think you gave us a good look at who your character is: his motivation, his life choices, his regrets. You did an excellent job of expressing the character's personality/inner life, and you've still got lots of room to get in his head and explore really deeply. Can't wait to see what you do in coming weeks.

Awesome gfx by Crow McMorris <3

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Post by Ray Burnett on Jan 13, 2017 10:25:42 GMT -6

Post by Bonnie Blue on Jan 14, 2017 7:16:19 GMT -6

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