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Post by Shooter McCool on Oct 12, 2016 14:10:08 GMT -6
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Post by Kuno Kenji on Oct 12, 2016 14:24:43 GMT -6
I'll start out with saying that I haven't read your other RPs, so I started out a little lost.
That being said, this was a good RP, good comedy, good CD, good Shoot. But in my opinion, I have to give you the same advice that I've gotten several times, flesh it out, keep the same things you have now, but add more to everything, the CD and Shoot could have been structured the same but with a few more lines on each part.
Still, you don't suck.
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