Looking For Feedback. Again.

I would firstly like to say sorry just in case my roleplay ticked some negative boxes. I know I used some pretty horrible words in the roleplay that may have ticked a negative box here, so just in case I have, then I apologise for that. It was just a development of the character that was caused due to Stevie Corah's Twitter Board account. It was all In Character, certainly not Out Of Character.



I would secondly like to thank Stevie Corah himself. I think you have brought out the best in me. At least I hope it has. Really enjoyed writing what I wrote. You are a perfect person to roleplay against. I am happy that I have gotten this opportunity to roleplay with you.



And thirdly, I just wanted to request some feedback on my roleplay. Any suggestions, compliments, negative points. Anything really. I am trying to do my best with this character, and I hope that it has come out alright. UCI has certainly given me a new, fresh idea for a character that I thought was long dead. Thanks for that.



So, anyhow, thanks for any feedback that is given. And I hope you enjoyed my roleplay. That is the most that I can hope for.


Here is the link: uciwrestling.freeforums.net/thread/1211/story-perzag-recollection