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Post by The Hentai Prince on Aug 28, 2016 15:39:15 GMT -6
NEW CHARACTER! Would really love to know what you all think. I racked my brain trying to figure out a way not to make it a one note joke and add depth. Did it work?!?! You be the judge! Please feel free to be honest!
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Post by Spencer Adams on Aug 28, 2016 23:25:00 GMT -6
Very good with the intro RP thing. We get a good look at who HP is. Next time, I think more shoot would help a lot, but considering this was a debut RP against a no show, I'm not critiquing that at the moment. Nice character who is funny with semi-serious laced throughout where it fits.
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Post by The Hentai Prince on Aug 29, 2016 10:02:19 GMT -6
Very good with the intro RP thing. We get a good look at who HP is. Next time, I think more shoot would help a lot, but considering this was a debut RP against a no show, I'm not critiquing that at the moment. Nice character who is funny with semi-serious laced throughout where it fits. Thanks for the feedback. There would have been more shoot but figured my opponent would no show and didn't want to make it too long. |
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Post by The Hentai Prince on Sept 4, 2016 15:36:02 GMT -6
RP up! Murder me, fam!
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Post by Spencer Adams on Sept 6, 2016 11:18:16 GMT -6
Another solid piece. I enjoyed the moe stars lines of acting dialogue during the shoot a lot and the CD between Adam and his sister is pretty interesting. Good shit, man.
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Post by The Hentai Prince on Sept 11, 2016 15:55:43 GMT -6
Third RP, this one was a lot of emotion. Did it work?
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Post by Kuno Kenji on Sept 11, 2016 16:14:47 GMT -6
I already gave you some feedback, but the answer is "Yes, yes it did work!"
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Post by Spencer Adams on Sept 12, 2016 11:32:47 GMT -6
Yeah, I'd say it worked. Gable bee gud riter. What else I gotta say, bruh? You do your thing and with this character, you bring some funny moments, some more serious ones, and you bring the usual look into the psyche of who you're writing.
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Post by The Hentai Prince on Sept 18, 2016 16:19:08 GMT -6
So 3k is hard. How did I do?
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