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Post by Jericho Salazar on Aug 21, 2016 13:58:09 GMT -6
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Post by Spencer Adams on Aug 21, 2016 16:11:22 GMT -6
Much more calm and collected for sure. One of the things I think you had to work on before was what I believed to be a need to just sort of slow down a touch with what you're saying as things maybe seemed rushed at times and I feel you improved on that here. Shoot improved too which is great, would like to see some more character development brought out, but overall a good showing from you.
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Post by Jericho Salazar on Aug 21, 2016 17:26:35 GMT -6
Much more calm and collected for sure. One of the things I think you had to work on before was what I believed to be a need to just sort of slow down a touch with what you're saying as things maybe seemed rushed at times and I feel you improved on that here. Shoot improved too which is great, would like to see some more character development brought out, but overall a good showing from you. Thank you me brutha. I'm still working on the whole character development thing |
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