Ask me my opinion on your characters and ill give feedback

I'd ask you about of Teo, but I'm not sure if even I understand the whole "he's a different Teo than the original because it's an alternate universe and Blaze never came along" thing I was going for anymore, lol.

Karlie Nash, I have literally been following you since you first came into UCI and I have been super impressed with how fast you are to get something on the board for your matches. One it shows your confidence in your work, two it makes you a respectable opponent to face off with (too many of us wait until the weekends to post and it's a dick move, lol just saying.), and three you obviously know who your character is.

I remember when I first attempted a non wrestler turned wrestler, it was a guy named Jason Slasher who was in a tag team with another guy named Michael Lumas who were Hollywood Horror. If you have followed my Kevin Bishop character in WCF and here, then you may see the name Jason Slasher and a red flag goes up... I have updated him and he's far from who he use to be. Him and Michael were actually stuntmen turned wrestlers and I created a giant stink bomb that only lasted 2 months, so you are doing way better than me in that instance. lol I gave up because it just wasn't working and I had zero faith in that effort. Your Karlie Nash was a hockey player turned wrestler and it freakin' works. I mean hell, hockey is violent and there's fighting in it, so it's not crazy that Karlie wrestles.

Now for my criticism... You make me feel like we are getting down with foreplay, then work calls and you run off leaving me hanging... lol terrible analogy, but what I mean by it, like take your last rp for an example... You shot on Bad News and Adam Young, but just as I was getting into the shoot, it was over. I honestly believe you had more to say, hell you could say something along the lines of the bitches you skated with hit harder than the two of them put together or something. I like Karlie's cougar hunter side and you have characters who can help your story move along, but you fall down a bit in the shoot area...

Now my suggestion to get better at it, is to find someone to feud with and make it someone you can toss ideas around with. I saw my buddy FPV do a Q&A with another writer recently that lead to them basically figuring out what things to shoot on each other about. Me personally, I love thought put into the shoot on me, but I basically left myself open for the easiest thing to say about me... People call me a cult leader all the time, but that's the best part, I created that stigma. Then again you created something that I haven't seen too many people say about you... A hockey playing chick who dicks cougars... It's too easy to tell the LGBT to shove off, so they can bash on you, but it's a whole other thing to shoot on your character as a whole. Sometimes you have to tear yourself down so your opponents can't, which I think you were headed toward in your last rp as well... You spoke of losing a bit in your career and how you slapping Petrov with his own junk, wasn't much of an accomplishment.

A cool dynamic maybe would be to have your cougar chick really start to dig in to standing up for you against the other wrestlers as a mouth piece of sorts. Karlie is tough, but I think vulnerability in her maybe showing more of her connection with her mamasita would be a good touch.

So to answer your question, I don't find Karlie to be a failure at all. Keep doing what you're doing, just aim for more is all.

The 1sickbastard... Or as i see you in our community... The Y2J of UCI/WCF. Youve been consistent for so damn long and some way you have stayed true to yourself, but also have evovled yourself to stay relevant.

I love your, i don't give a fuck mentality, which allows you to gun for anyone you feel like.

Your ability to create characters is second to none... Believe me i attempt to hang but you are on a whole other level.

You know how to get your point across without droning on and on, which is a lost art form.

I am just as much of a Adam Young mark as the rest of our Cliq lol but your successes are well deserved. Keep plugging away brother, we are indeed your fans.

Fine me two!

Casey Holliday is on the cusp of greatness. I remember when Mallory came along and rose to the top, we all wondered who would be the next female lead...

Answer, Casey Holliday stepped up to the plate. She didnt have to play crazy evil villain who will kill your kids either.

Kinda funny one has daddy issues and the other has mommy issues, but that's besides the point.

I dig your character and shes been on a rise taking out Alex Richards, standing out in Infinity, and even beating Saint Remi lmao. Remi FTW all day bay bay.

No but seriously, i think you've done wonders on creating the spoiled self entitled rich brat character and you do it with some originality too. Youve proven to be a legit threat, so keep building on that.

Y u no do me? Was it the Welcome Back Cotter reference? If so, I completely understand.